Rick wrote:Sounds great LD and Jim. Great mix. My only complaint is I'd like to hear another verse. The lyrics end too early in the song for me. I know that's probably not what you want to hear because lyrics are a bitch, but that's what I think it needs.
Great song. Nice bluesy, eerie vibe. Really liked it.
Got any ideas ? I thought about making the 2nd verse last as it seems like a good closing statement and trying a new 2nd verse.... But again I do like it going out with a musical build up as well. Maybe put two gunshots right at the end.... Ewwwwww.....
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