Just wrote my best song yet!!!

[Blueskies]

Love the chorus! Sounds great overall but it's still a work in progress isn't it? There are a few spots that still need correcting don't they?
My feedback....
The word "questions" sounds like its coming thru the nose....I'm sure just due to the accent. The word "were" sounds like "wore". "So lost in each udder" ...I know he's French and I expect some accent but in the rest of the song it's not very detectable so the mispronunciation of those few words stick out more, I guess.
The loud " NO" yell is a tiny bit disconcerting... it sounds nasal and too loud ...for quite tone of the rest of the song.... maybe it would help to build the strings up to a crescendo after that?...a little more drama, if you will, to go with it...right towards the end..bringing up the guitar a bit too.?
But anyway..just my 2 cents and what do I know...
I like the song a lot and as I said, it sounds fantastic overall...you guys are doing great and I enjoy hearing your music!

Hey Blueskies, Thanks for all of the feedback! And yes...it's still a work in progress. I had to crack up when I read that you said he was french! He's Italian There are a few notes here and there that are pronounced just a tad off, but that stuff is easily fixable.

I do think the guitars are a little too low also. And I agree with you also on the "NO". He'll beat me up, but I'll talk to him about it tomorrow. I mentioned it today, but we were both trying to get a lot of other things done. Will fix several of those things though. I'm very glad you liked it though, and we're very proud of it.

I've got to interject some mistakes into my posts now and then due to some mistakingly thinking that maybe I think I'm perfect so I've got to either intentionally... or not?
Sounds good, Jimbo! I'm looking forward to hearing the final cut!