Hey man, great job on the songs! You just need to practice a little more to refine your skills, and you'll have that thing mastered in NO time.

I know a lot of musicians don't like it, but practice does make perfection. I'm no way near perfection with the keys, or my songwriting, but I must say...I have played and practiced for probably thoushands of hours over the years (no joke at all!). Every year, I'll hear something I played a year or two prior and think "Man...I sucked ASS back then!".
It's all about devoting time on a consistent basis to your instrument. Some people become awesome in a couple of years, but others like me have to constantly work on it for DECADES!
For the record, I like song idea #3 the best. Just keep at it, and you will do awesome!
