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Vladan wrote:Which song... hmmm, i'd day all of them. They probably would be on radio and charts aswell - As crazy as that sounds, and just because its Steve Perry.
Marabelle wrote:
Oh sometimes I want to squeeze the necks of people real tight until their heads pop off just like you said Deano! But not you!
Greggie wrote:Depends on your question. Do you mean better lyrically and or musically? Or do you mean better as in commerically successful?
Vladan wrote:They probably would be on radio and charts aswell - As crazy as that sounds.
Jeremey wrote:Strictly from a lyrical and melody standpoint I would say Every Generation. That song could be an anthem along the lines of Be Good To Yourself, but I think Jonathan Cain misses the mark, and the melody sounds like a cross between a halfassed Lita Ford song and a Pepsi commercial. Perry and Cain together could have really jazzed that one up. Same with Better Life. Added some suspense to the melody line.
The_Noble_Cause wrote:Greggie wrote:Depends on your question. Do you mean better lyrically and or musically? Or do you mean better as in commerically successful?
Yeah, I already clarified this to Vladan. I meant lyrically, or musically.
Greggie wrote:The_Noble_Cause wrote:Greggie wrote:Depends on your question. Do you mean better lyrically and or musically? Or do you mean better as in commerically successful?
Yeah, I already clarified this to Vladan. I meant lyrically, or musically.
Every artist has their own stamp on things. As far as these songs musically and lyrically, I would say maybe to add a better course to songs like In Harms Way. As far as musically, I can't really see anything that needs improvement per se. The bulk of that is Neal and Jon's responsiblity.
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