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Don't know if this has been done on MR before, but thought it would be sick to write a song together, we can write it and then fight over it and then some of the more talented people can add the tunes... So, this can be edited and such but here goes: p.s. this song beginning is in no way a relection of my own life, I love the people in my family
MR Journey song:

I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes but not sure now if you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now.......

steveforever wrote:Don't know if this has been done on MR before, but thought it would be sick to write a song together, we can write it and then fight over it and then some of the more talented people can add the tunes... So, this can be edited and such but here goes: p.s. this song beginning is in no way a relection of my own life, I love the people in my family
MR Journey song:

I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes but not sure now if you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now.......

until you came home drunk with another and i knew it had to end,
the knife kept under my pillow in your leg i had to send..

steveforever wrote:I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes and you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now....

Until you came home drunk with another and I knew it had to end
The knife kept under my pillow in your leg I had to send...

It sounded like a Chicago song until Larry came in, now it's gonna to be a gang rap song

BIIIIIIITCH! YOU FUCKING WHORE!!!
You used me! You never loved me!
I hope you slide under a gas truck and taste your own blood!
DIE! DIE! DIE!
I want my records back!
I want my fucking records back!"

Sure it's plagiarized, but I think it would work for the chorus.

AR wrote:BIIIIIIITCH! YOU FUCKING WHORE!!!
You used me! You never loved me!
I hope you slide under a gas truck and taste your own blood!
DIE! DIE! DIE!
I want my records back!
I want my fucking records back!"

Sure it's plagurized, but I think it would work for the chours.

and in comes Eminem

and in comes Eminem

Sam Kinison, actually.

AR wrote:

and in comes Eminem

Sam Kinison, actually.

Whoever the fuck that is, glad I don't know as they're not lyrics I'd put my name to

I think it was Sam Kineson
and isn't it ironic it's just about how he met his end.

Did you just hear that...I swear it sounded like....

(Sam adds his comment)...The LYRICS I'll Add...the rest is statement

"Yeah, that was me you Fuckin Whore Bitch
It ls should have been you
It should have been you...."

...Echoing from the comic beyond...

Shadowsong wrote:I think it was Sam Kineson
and isn't it ironic it's just about how he met his end.

Shadowsong wrote:I think it was Sam Kineson
and isn't it ironic it's just about how he met his end.

So the whore pushed him under the gas truck

Didn't his car go under the back og=f a truck and
well to put it nicely
Mess with his head?

Shadowsong wrote:Didn't his car go under the back og=f a truck and
well to put it nicely
Mess with his head?

How could his head get messed up anymore with lyrics like that

steveforever wrote:I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes and you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now....

Until you came home drunk with another and I knew it had to end
The knife kept under my pillow in your leg I had to send...

You Used me, you never loved me
I hope you know that
I want my life back, I want my life back....(sorry AR had to edit yours a bit**

styxman wrote:

Shadowsong wrote:Didn't his car go under the back og=f a truck and
well to put it nicely
Mess with his head?

How could his head get messed up anymore with lyrics like that

That post was a reply to your statement so why would you think it was a lyric?

The LYRICS are...

"Yeah, that was me
So blind I couldn't see
It should have been you
It should have been you...."

Shadowsong wrote:

styxman wrote:

Shadowsong wrote:Didn't his car go under the back og=f a truck and
well to put it nicely
Mess with his head?

How could his head get messed up anymore with lyrics like that

That post was a reply to your statement so why would you think it was a lyric?


I meant the initial lyrics, get a grip Shadow for christ sake
Back to the lyric thread now

styxman wrote:

Shadowsong wrote:

styxman wrote:

Shadowsong wrote:Didn't his car go under the back og=f a truck and
well to put it nicely
Mess with his head?

How could his head get messed up anymore with lyrics like that

That post was a reply to your statement so why would you think it was a lyric?


I meant the initial lyrics, get a grip Shadow for christ sake
Back to the lyric thread now

OOoooh, someone got up on the wrong side of the cone today.

Sam Kinison was the greatest comedian of all-time

steveforever wrote:I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes and you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now....

Until you came home drunk with another and I knew it had to end
The knife kept under my pillow in your leg I had to send...

But then I thought about what I had done
and felt that my love for you could not be undone.

Chorus:
That's the way I think about you
That's how much you mean to me

Time with you is all I need
to find my way in through life's dark seed

LarryFromNextDoor wrote:

steveforever wrote:Don't know if this has been done on MR before, but thought it would be sick to write a song together, we can write it and then fight over it and then some of the more talented people can add the tunes... So, this can be edited and such but here goes: p.s. this song beginning is in no way a relection of my own life, I love the people in my family
MR Journey song:

I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes but not sure now if you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now.......

until you came home drunk with another and i knew it had to end,
the knife kept under my pillow in your leg i had to send..

I guess if this is the last verse

I'd add

"Love got a hold of me
So blind I couldn't see
It should have been your heart
It should have been your heart...."

fred_journeyman wrote:

steveforever wrote:I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes and you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now....

Until you came home drunk with another and I knew it had to end
The knife kept under my pillow in your leg I had to send...

But then I thought about what I had done
and felt that my love for you could not be undone.

Chorus:
That's the way I think about you
That's how much you mean to me

Time with you is all I need
to find my way in through life's dark seed

Fred, that's nice

"that's just the way it is
should of been yours and not his
you don't even have a clue
what else was i gonna do"

hey i like this

steveforever wrote:I was lost alone tonight and had time to think about you
Seems all I do is find ways not to love you anymore, its' getting easier to do
You used to be perfect in my eyes and you still live in my heart
I can't seem to find the key to that love now....

Until you came home drunk with another and I knew it had to end
The knife kept under my pillow in your leg I had to send...

But then I thought about what I'd done and felt my love for you could not be undone.
That's just the way it is should been yours and not his. You don't even have a clue
What else was I gonna do
You Used me, You never loved me
I hope you know that
I want my life back, I want my life back

Yeah that was me
So blind I couldn't see
It should have been you
It should have been you

That's the way I think about you
That's how much you mean to me
Time with you is all I need...to find my way in through life's dark seed

All these memorie's of you

stopping me from living my life

Thought's of you

consuming me

ruining me

day and night

Your heart was never there for me

to have and make mine

I thought it could be just a matter of time

Why couldn't you care for me

When I believed

everything was fine

Got to get rid of these memories

they're tearing me apart

got to find someone

to heal this broken heart

It was so wrong of you

to leave me this way

shattered and confused just wanted you to stay

Got to let you go now

Got to find a way

but in my dream's, I only want you to stay

~ VL or better known as TheVoiceLover.( don't laugh I just came up with it and it's my first time trying to list a post )

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Eric wrote:Sam Kinison was the greatest comedian of all-time

Uh, I don't think so.

Maybe the LOUDEST of all time tho.

How about the melody ? It is hard to write w/o hearing songs already written. It least it was for me in music classes.Start with that than add lyrics that fit.