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STORY_TELLER wrote:Sounds to me like this recording starts with the genesis of what became "Anyway". It started in one direction then ended with what became the final song. What we're hearing is Perry's sculpting process for finding the melody. No doubt he worked this way with Jon Cain in Journey too. Right around the 4 minute mark you can hear the chord progressions start to change and Steve started finding the melody.
tater1977 wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:Sounds to me like this recording starts with the genesis of what became "Anyway". It started in one direction then ended with what became the final song. What we're hearing is Perry's sculpting process for finding the melody. No doubt he worked this way with Jon Cain in Journey too. Right around the 4 minute mark you can hear the chord progressions start to change and Steve started finding the melody.
At the start it sort of sounds like the beginning to Anyway & does change to something else..still sounds pretty good... Thanks
STORY_TELLER wrote:tater1977 wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:Sounds to me like this recording starts with the genesis of what became "Anyway". It started in one direction then ended with what became the final song. What we're hearing is Perry's sculpting process for finding the melody. No doubt he worked this way with Jon Cain in Journey too. Right around the 4 minute mark you can hear the chord progressions start to change and Steve started finding the melody.
At the start it sort of sounds like the beginning to Anyway & does change to something else..still sounds pretty good... Thanks
Miner's piano has a hint of the Anyway chords in the beginning, but at the 4:23 mark it changes and really hits the pocket and Perry keyed into it and changed his melody choice. It's all the searching for the song process. Basically, top to bottom, It's all Anyway.
Like I said, no doubt this is the same process Perry did with Cain and Schon and shows how integral Perry was to the song writing process in Journey. If you listen to the bootleg of "With a Tear", Perry laid down temp lyrics to create a template for finding the melody. Perry molds a song to find the sweet spots of the melody and makes it shine. That's not just a singer, that's a song writer.
Monker wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:tater1977 wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:Sounds to me like this recording starts with the genesis of what became "Anyway". It started in one direction then ended with what became the final song. What we're hearing is Perry's sculpting process for finding the melody. No doubt he worked this way with Jon Cain in Journey too. Right around the 4 minute mark you can hear the chord progressions start to change and Steve started finding the melody.
At the start it sort of sounds like the beginning to Anyway & does change to something else..still sounds pretty good... Thanks
Miner's piano has a hint of the Anyway chords in the beginning, but at the 4:23 mark it changes and really hits the pocket and Perry keyed into it and changed his melody choice. It's all the searching for the song process. Basically, top to bottom, It's all Anyway.
Like I said, no doubt this is the same process Perry did with Cain and Schon and shows how integral Perry was to the song writing process in Journey. If you listen to the bootleg of "With a Tear", Perry laid down temp lyrics to create a template for finding the melody. Perry molds a song to find the sweet spots of the melody and makes it shine. That's not just a singer, that's a song writer.
Oh please. There are so many ways to approach songwriting. Sometimes there's a lyrical idea. Sometimes there's a musical idea. In this case, they obvious had some good piano melody and Perry was just throwing lyrics at it to see what worked. Obviously, nothing did work...so they used a bit of the melody for Anyway...which I would think Perry had lyrics for.
"With a Tear" is the same situation...Perry fumbling and mumbling through a bunch of senseless lyrics...where he only had a chorus...but the melody was already there. The lyrics were never finished so Neal and Jonathan polished it up as an instrumental for the box set.
Thank God Jonathanc can write music AND lyrics so he could help Perry along with some of this. If you compare the songwriting prior to Escape to everything after, it is obvious that Jonathan filled in the blanks lyrically where nobody else could...no need to have a five minute song where the last 1/3 is "na, na, na, na" because Perry couldn't think of anything else to say.
Now, that may be Perry's songwriting process...and why it takes him a lifetime to finish anything...but I definitely do not believe it was Journey's. Sometimes it may have worked ("Patiently", for example), but it seems to me it didn't for this, and it didn't for "With a Tear". It would have taken Jonathan, or somebody else for FTLOSM, to finish up the idea.
STORY_TELLER wrote:Monker wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:tater1977 wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:Sounds to me like this recording starts with the genesis of what became "Anyway". It started in one direction then ended with what became the final song. What we're hearing is Perry's sculpting process for finding the melody. No doubt he worked this way with Jon Cain in Journey too. Right around the 4 minute mark you can hear the chord progressions start to change and Steve started finding the melody.
At the start it sort of sounds like the beginning to Anyway & does change to something else..still sounds pretty good... Thanks
Miner's piano has a hint of the Anyway chords in the beginning, but at the 4:23 mark it changes and really hits the pocket and Perry keyed into it and changed his melody choice. It's all the searching for the song process. Basically, top to bottom, It's all Anyway.
Like I said, no doubt this is the same process Perry did with Cain and Schon and shows how integral Perry was to the song writing process in Journey. If you listen to the bootleg of "With a Tear", Perry laid down temp lyrics to create a template for finding the melody. Perry molds a song to find the sweet spots of the melody and makes it shine. That's not just a singer, that's a song writer.
Oh please. There are so many ways to approach songwriting. Sometimes there's a lyrical idea. Sometimes there's a musical idea. In this case, they obvious had some good piano melody and Perry was just throwing lyrics at it to see what worked. Obviously, nothing did work...so they used a bit of the melody for Anyway...which I would think Perry had lyrics for.
"With a Tear" is the same situation...Perry fumbling and mumbling through a bunch of senseless lyrics...where he only had a chorus...but the melody was already there. The lyrics were never finished so Neal and Jonathan polished it up as an instrumental for the box set.
Thank God Jonathanc can write music AND lyrics so he could help Perry along with some of this. If you compare the songwriting prior to Escape to everything after, it is obvious that Jonathan filled in the blanks lyrically where nobody else could...no need to have a five minute song where the last 1/3 is "na, na, na, na" because Perry couldn't think of anything else to say.
Now, that may be Perry's songwriting process...and why it takes him a lifetime to finish anything...but I definitely do not believe it was Journey's. Sometimes it may have worked ("Patiently", for example), but it seems to me it didn't for this, and it didn't for "With a Tear". It would have taken Jonathan, or somebody else for FTLOSM, to finish up the idea.
Wow, talk about apples and oranges -- and pears and plums and nectarines. Jesus boy, you really love to mishmash things that have nothing to do with one another, huh? Clearly I could fill a thimble with what you know about the creative process or what it takes to do something creative.
First of all, I happen to love Anyway. I also happen to love a lot of the stuff Journey did before Cain. That you don't, is your opinion and you're entitled to it, but it is also irrelevant to the point you just spewed.
Secondly, and specifically to the point of the creative process you just shit all over -- All creative people work this way in some manner. It's a sculpting process. This is done with all kinds of creative writing. Every writer worth his salt will tell you the first draft you write with your heart, the second you write with your head. That means, you toss it out there, you get it out of your head, you hear it in your own ears, and feel your way through to see what works and what doesn't. Video editors do this with movies, they pull pieces apart, rearrange them, looking for the best fit.
Writing, Drawing, Painting, modeling, film making and yes -- SONG CREATION -- all function via the same principle. Look up the word "Scatting" Monker. It's been around long before Perry and that's what Perry was doing on With A Tear. LYRICS are born out of that process. You ever heard of a jam session? Instrumentals to SONGS are born out of that process. You think Cain doesn't start this way himself, that it just magically comes to him? You think Neal doesn't sit at home and let his fingers fly, recording what he does to see what what comes out of him, then uses it in a song later? You're dreaming. This process has NOTHING to do with why (as you say) "it takes Perry forever to finish a song". It's not remotely related to that issue whatsoever. Again, apples and oranges.
To put such a severe limit on what you feel is the "legitimate" method to go about song writing shows how little you know about being creative.
And finally, Perry is listed as a SONG WRITER on the stuff he did with Journey (with an exception here and there). That means he changed lyrics to suit melodies, he honed and helped fashion the final product -- you know, the ones we all still listen to today? To diminish his contributions to the song writing process is inaccurate on it's face. You think DSB or Open Arms would have been the same song and had the same impact without Perry's craftsmanship input? Again, you're dreaming.
Now if you want to complain about Perry's inactivity, his personal insecurity demons that keep him from performing or putting out music, that's fine. But that's a separate issue and a separate discussion. Don't toss an apple into a discussion about oranges and expect to be taken seriously.
Geez, what a lunatic.
STORY_TELLER wrote:First of all, I happen to love Anyway. I also happen to love a lot of the stuff Journey did before Cain. That you don't, is your opinion and you're entitled to it, but it is also irrelevant to the point you just spewed.
Secondly, and specifically to the point of the creative process you just shit all over
All creative people work this way in some manner.
Writing, Drawing, Painting, modeling, film making and yes -- SONG CREATION -- all function via the same principle. Look up the word "Scatting" Monker. It's been around long before Perry and that's what Perry was doing on With A Tear. LYRICS are born out of that process. You ever heard of a jam session? Instrumentals to SONGS are born out of that process. You think Cain doesn't start this way himself, that it just magically comes to him? You think Neal doesn't sit at home and let his fingers fly, recording what he does to see what what comes out of him, then uses it in a song later? You're dreaming. This process has NOTHING to do with why (as you say) "it takes Perry forever to finish a song". It's not remotely related to that issue whatsoever. Again, apples and oranges.
To put such a severe limit on what you feel is the "legitimate" method to go about song writing shows how little you know about being creative.
And finally, Perry is listed as a SONG WRITER on the stuff he did with Journey (with an exception here and there). That means he changed lyrics to suit melodies, he honed and helped fashion the final product -- you know, the ones we all still listen to today? To diminish his contributions to the song writing process is inaccurate on it's face. You think DSB or Open Arms would have been the same song and had the same impact without Perry's craftsmanship input? Again, you're dreaming.
Now if you want to complain about Perry's inactivity
his personal insecurity demons that keep him from performing or putting out music
Geez, what a lunatic.
STORY_TELLER wrote:#1: You did state your opinion, it's contained here: If you compare the songwriting prior to Escape to everything after, it is obvious that Jonathan filled in the blanks lyrically where nobody else could...no need to have a five minute song where the last 1/3 is "na, na, na, na" because Perry couldn't think of anything else to say.
#2: I hate getting into the quote splitting contest. It's weak.
BROAD STROKES:
You stated in your response your intent was to simply show the following.
(A) to "shit all over was this fantasy that Perry just pulled Anyway out of his ass from this writing session."
(B) to show that "No 'lyrics were born' out of this (being this other supposed song in the Anyway session) or "With a Tear"...these are simply unfinished songs. That's the bottom line, get over it."
First of all, at no point did I state Perry pulled Anyway out of his ass. I said it was his process for finding the song. I didn't say the lyrics, I said the SONG. Maybe the use of the word "writing process" is what confused you, but NEWS FLASH: There's more to a song than the written word of the lyrics. There's the melody it has to blend with. If the lyrics and melody don't blend, you don't have a song, you have a mess. A good melody is the more difficult element to nail down.
When a good melody is found, the easier element to alter is the lyric.
You of course follow the same spirit and intent of the original lyric,'
to keep the story you started with and maintain the ideas you are trying to convey, but you change the specific words until you find the ones that blend with the melody.
And what I said was this ANYWAY session showed us how integral Perry was to the SONG writing process in Journey. I have no doubt Perry did this exact same method/altering of Jon Cain's words on every song Perry is given a writing credit for. Does that clarify my statement enough for you?
I used with a tear as an example to illustrate my point about Perry's process because the approach is clearly akin to what we're hearing in the Anyway session.
My opinion is that Cain, as talented and prolific as he is, doesn't originate songs (including melodies) as strong as those he did when HE collaborated with Perry.
slucero wrote:don't forget that in songwriting there is a melody for the music.. AND one for the lyric...
STORY_TELLER wrote:I think we can get Laura to answer the question for us as to whether or not the writing session heard in this link is all "Anyway" or if there was another song that was dropped and then Perry went onto Anyway.
Laura, if you're reading, I hate to drag you into this, but if you could you please post if I'm right or wrong? You don't have to go into detail, simply stating Storyteller is right or wrong will be enough.
tater1977 wrote:Anyone know if this trax was ever finished or just left on the
floor during Steve & Tim's writing sessions?
Seems like the Missing You was finished by this time....
& this was just something extra but left unfinished ?
http://youtu.be/LAMIMUlDUas
Ftloperry wrote:tater1977 wrote:Anyone know if this trax was ever finished or just left on the
floor during Steve & Tim's writing sessions?
Seems like the Missing You was finished by this time....
& this was just something extra but left unfinished ?
http://youtu.be/LAMIMUlDUas
I wouldn't let me hear it. Said the video was private.
Rick wrote:Ftloperry wrote:tater1977 wrote:Anyone know if this trax was ever finished or just left on the
floor during Steve & Tim's writing sessions?
Seems like the Missing You was finished by this time....
& this was just something extra but left unfinished ?
http://youtu.be/LAMIMUlDUas
I wouldn't let me hear it. Said the video was private.
See Lora's post above.
Lora wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote:I think we can get Laura to answer the question for us as to whether or not the writing session heard in this link is all "Anyway" or if there was another song that was dropped and then Perry went onto Anyway.
Laura, if you're reading, I hate to drag you into this, but if you could you please post if I'm right or wrong? You don't have to go into detail, simply stating Storyteller is right or wrong will be enough.
1) You spelled my name wrong.
2) I seriously doubt that Steve or Tim Miner wanted this out there so whoever leaked this 'writing session' is unprofessional and hopefully not working in the music industry any longer.
3) I don't read posts by Monker. You made me go back and read it so I could answer you. Now I have a headache.
4) You are wasting keystrokes and bandwidth trying to reason with someone who has nothing better to do than hang out on a Steve Perry forum and bash said person.
5) I wasn't there during this writing session (too bad) so don't know where it was going. Sounds like they were throwing ideas around as happens in most writing sessions. Steve played us a few tracks recorded during that time that didn't make it on FTLOSM, but I don't remember specifics.
steveo777 wrote:Rick wrote:Ftloperry wrote:tater1977 wrote:Anyone know if this trax was ever finished or just left on the
floor during Steve & Tim's writing sessions?
Seems like the Missing You was finished by this time....
& this was just something extra but left unfinished ?
http://youtu.be/LAMIMUlDUas
I wouldn't let me hear it. Said the video was private.
See Lora's post above.
Somebody put the smack down on!
STORY_TELLER wrote: Hi Lora (SORRY, SORRY, SORRY about the name misspelling! I'm working via email with someone who's name is spelled "Laura", so it was subconscious, lol...)
Thanks for chiming in, most kind. SORRY for making you read Monker's posts. It's not a good idea to share one's headache. I recommend Excederine myself [smiles].
Agreed on your assessment of wasting keystrokes and bandwidth. I'm smack in the middle of juggling deadlines on 3 projects so I really don't have time to mess around in here, except on occasion over morning coffee, and even that has a time limit.
Yes, I figured this boot wasn't an intentional leak, and agreed, very unprofessional of the individual who leaked it, but I have to say, my ears are grateful. It's a tremendous treat to hear Steve's sculpting process.
Shame you can't recall the specifics of the tracks you mentioned, or if this audio track is related to them, but if you're thinking this was them throwing ideas around, based on your experience, is it safe to say this was a "spitball session" (i.e. throwing ideas against the wall to see what sticks)?
Thank you, Lora, sincerely.
Lora wrote:STORY_TELLER wrote: Hi Lora (SORRY, SORRY, SORRY about the name misspelling! I'm working via email with someone who's name is spelled "Laura", so it was subconscious, lol...)
Thanks for chiming in, most kind. SORRY for making you read Monker's posts. It's not a good idea to share one's headache. I recommend Excederine myself [smiles].
Agreed on your assessment of wasting keystrokes and bandwidth. I'm smack in the middle of juggling deadlines on 3 projects so I really don't have time to mess around in here, except on occasion over morning coffee, and even that has a time limit.
Yes, I figured this boot wasn't an intentional leak, and agreed, very unprofessional of the individual who leaked it, but I have to say, my ears are grateful. It's a tremendous treat to hear Steve's sculpting process.
Shame you can't recall the specifics of the tracks you mentioned, or if this audio track is related to them, but if you're thinking this was them throwing ideas around, based on your experience, is it safe to say this was a "spitball session" (i.e. throwing ideas against the wall to see what sticks)?
Thank you, Lora, sincerely.
No worries. I was just messing with you.![]()
Steve played those tracks for Cyndy and I over a decade ago. I can't even remember what I did yesterday.
Lora wrote:Art Vandelay wrote:So in one word, what is it like to have Steve Perry play one of his demo tracks for you?
wondrous
Monker wrote:I did not give my opinion on if I liked Journey's music prior to Escape or not. I am simply stating that Jonathan elevated the songwriting in Journey to a new level. A level that Steve Perry could not attain without him.
STORY_TELLER wrote:And what I said was this ANYWAY session showed us how integral Perry was to the SONG writing process in Journey. I have no doubt Perry did this exact same method/altering of Jon Cain's words on every song Perry is given a writing credit for. Does that clarify my statement enough for you?
Monker wrote:And, I say this 'writing session' is not an "Anyway' writing session, except in your bias opinion. Therefore, it isn't an example of anything. And, even if it was, you are generalizing yet again by thinking this is how Perry got a writing credit on EVERY song that Perry is given a writing credit for. He could have changed the lyrics in this way, he could have the melody in this way, he could have change either before a 'writing session' even happened', he could have changed either in the studio when they were doing the actual recording. Or, he could have told the band to give him a writing credit or he wouldn't sing the song for the record. You just don't know....nobody does except Perry and the band.
STORY_TELLER wrote:My opinion is that Cain, as talented and prolific as he is, doesn't originate songs (including melodies) as strong as those he did when HE collaborated with Perry.
Monker wrote:IYO, as a songwriter, Cain doesn't "originate" songs as strong as those he did with Perry? Your loss.
Kor'n wrote:Evolution is better than Escape. Like that DJ interviewer said, I too "like the simplicity [realness] of it."
And here is another opinion from the dreaded one.....
"Steve Perry, a fine singer with knack for writing songs with strong hooks. They work better now as a unit and never rocked harder." Rollingstone 1980/Departure
I'm w/you ...for years I went back and forth, but I've justMemorex wrote:Evolution is what got me into the band. I still favor TBF above all, but Evolution is probably my second favorite.
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