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The full song is now streaming at ReverbNation, here's a link:

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_6029717

Let me know what you think!


[edit: link corrected]

I think that the vocals are outstanding, but it packs very little punch musically. Overall, I just couldn't get into it. But I will give it another listen later tonight.

Saint John wrote:I think that the vocals are outstanding, but it packs very little punch musically. Overall, I just couldn't get into it. But I will give it another listen later tonight.

How DARE you criticize and affect someones art and livelihood ?! :p

Behshad wrote:

Saint John wrote:I think that the vocals are outstanding, but it packs very little punch musically. Overall, I just couldn't get into it. But I will give it another listen later tonight.

How DARE you criticize and affect someones art and livelihood ?! :p

Nice sig

Saint John wrote:I think that the vocals are outstanding, but it packs very little punch musically. Overall, I just couldn't get into it. But I will give it another listen later tonight.

Thanks man!

It's offline right now because John pointed out a few minutes ago that I misaligned his guitar solo....FUCK!!!

Will get it repaired straight away....Glad you like the vocals! Regarding the rest, it was meant to be kind of a quiet hymn type song, my solo stuff is a bit more etheral and definitely not for everyone, but give it another listen. In fact, if you put it on your iPod on repeat and go to sleep with it tonight, it will lull you to sleep like a baby!

Here's the correct link with the correctly placed guitar track, LOL:

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_6029717

Thanks for checking it out!

Very minimalistic. Reminds me of Color My World or The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face.

Don wrote:Very minimalistic. Reminds me of Color My World or The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face.

Wow, Don, George Michael's version of "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face" was exactly what I modeled this arrangement on, though in it's original form it was a fast pop song.

Jeremey wrote:

Don wrote:Very minimalistic. Reminds me of Color My World or The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face.

Wow, Don, George Michael's version of "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face" was exactly what I modeled this arrangement on, though in it's original form it was a fast pop song.

Coincidentally, Leona Lewis has a cover of that same song sitting on the UK charts right now.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3t4LpqKpFYI

Jeremey wrote:Here's the correct link with the correctly placed guitar track, LOL:

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_6029717

Thanks for checking it out!

The vocals and instrumentation sound great but something about it just seems kind of awkward. The lyrics just don't seem to flow together all that well.

Jeremey ...have you been hangin' w/the bros, in Detroit?!?!
Chills!! Your voice is soulful, emotive and
incredible!! I love it!! Everything else was
secondary to the vox, sorry, I'll listen more!!

Don wrote:Very minimalistic. Reminds me of Color My World or The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face.

Yes, yes, yes!!!

Jeremey....just wanted to go on record and say "I like it". You have a very unique voice (despite the obvious influence(s))...great to hear something original from you well produced.

Thanks for checking it out, folks!