Do you know that universities have online courses too? did you not realize this and sorry I dont proof read these posts after I write them I type with 2 fingers
see below
, my comments are below. It was nice working and getting to know you too. Good luck in your future classes.
William S. Okrepkie
Faculty
univerity of pheonix
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"RICK BENNETT" <weathergeek5@email.wintu.edu> wrote in message news:189CFEC50C5FC145BB871554A114DC8702B778B5@wiupub18.ols.phoenix.edu...
Please see the attachments. Thanks it has been nice working with you for this term.
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Axia college of the University of Phoenix
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Final Project
Content / Development Points Earned
200 Points Points Earned 200/200
Additional Comments:
All key elements of the assignment are covered in a substantive way.
• The plan is based on the two serious environmental problems.
• What strategies can be implemented.
• The limited resources were addressed in the argument.
• What were the practical solutions made that can be funded, developed and implemented.
• What would be the long and short term solutions to these two environmental problems.
• What outside support did you feel needed and available to your project.
• Your thoughts were explained in a 1,750-2,100 word paper using appropriate APA guidelines.
• The presentation consists of 5-10 slides appropriate for the speaker’s audience.
• Speaker’s notes are included with each slide.
The content is comprehensive, accurate, and/or persuasive.
• The presentation includes visual aids and utilizes elegant graphics.
• Text is limited to approximately five lines, with approximately five words per bulleted item.
• Appropriate use of font sizes is present.
The presentation develops a central theme or idea, directed toward the appropriate audience.
The presentation links theory to relevant examples of current experience and industry practice and uses the vocabulary of the theory correctly.
Major points are stated clearly; are supported by specific details, examples, or analysis; and are organized logically.
The introduction provides sufficient background on the topic and previews major points.
The conclusion is logical and reviews the major points.
Readability and Style Points Earned
25 Points 25/25
Additional Comments:
Slide transitions are logical and maintain the flow throughout the presentation.
The tone is appropriate to the content and assignment.
Sentences and paper are clear and concise.
Mechanics Points Earned
25 Points 25/25
Additional Comments:
Citations of original works within the body of the presentation follow APA guidelines.
The presentation is laid out with effective use of headings, font styles, and white space.
Rules of grammar, usage, and punctuation are followed.
Spelling is correct.
Total Points Earned
250 Points 250/250
Overall Comments:
You prepared an outstanding paper and slide presentation Rick. You did fine job of identifying the two serious environmental problems in you region. You researched the root problems and possible solutions, then and compared them with other areas in the world and how they might solve their issues. I liked how you put your slide presentation together. It too covered all the necessary elements of the assignment. I tried to think of some things I could suggest that might make your paper and power point presentation better, but couldn’t find anything substantial to say. An outstanding job.
Bill Okrepkie