OT: another stab at a song

[Blueskies]

This was done once before...thought we could try once again to come up with a MR song. Maybe there are some fresh idea's out there! Here is my cornball attempt. Feel free to add to mine or just come up with your own.

Come Back

Remember our time together
wild and carefree
Don't want to store it away
as just a memory

Come back to me baby
just one more time
Want to feel it again
lock it in my mind

Can't stand the missing
my heart feel's the pain
Need to hear once more
your sweet voice again

It's been so long
since I've seen your face
Want to get back to feel
your warm embrace

Only you have the power
to sooth the pain in my heart
Let's get back to the feeling
and promise never to part


( not to great but try to do what you can to contribute or start your own )

[r@y]

This was done once before...thought we could try once again to come up with a MR song. Maybe there are some fresh idea's out there! Here is my cornball attempt. Feel free to add to mine or just come up with your own.

Come Back

Remember our time together
wild and carefree
Don't want to store it away
as just a memory

Come back to me baby
just one more time
Want to feel it again
lock it in my mind

Can't stand the missing
my heart feel's the pain
Need to hear once more
your sweet voice again

It's been so long
since I've seen your face
Want to get back to feel
your warm embrace

Only you have the power
to sooth the pain in my heart
Let's get back to the feeling
and promise never to part


( not to great but try to do what you can to contribute or start your own )

Decent try, but needs more work....

God, its been so long since I have picked up a pen to write something....There was time lyrics used to just flow out of me....it seems so long ago...a time when was single and angry...after marrying and having kids, it all went away...now I find it difficult to write..geez...

A song for MR huh..? Well, sounds like something I could work on with a little bit of help...

Hell, this can actually be recorded..! We have defintely got some talent in our midst...

I will work on this...


Ray

[Rockindeano]

This is the GAYEST shit ever. Mac, delete this crap now. What THE Hell?

[Blueskies]

This is the GAYEST shit ever. Mac, delete this crap now. What THE Hell?

Is that a line for a song?? ...this was tried once before by someone else...just thought we could try it again! Come on. Deano! Thought you were a writer?? Come up with something better! ( I know it will be dirty, though! )

[NealIsGod]

It needs the word "load" in it.

[Chevypv]

This was done once before...thought we could try once again to come up with a MR song. Maybe there are some fresh idea's out there! Here is my cornball attempt. Feel free to add to mine or just come up with your own.

Come Back

Remember our time together
wild and carefree
Don't want to store it away
as just a memory

Come back to me baby
just one more time
Want to feel it again
lock it in my mind

Can't stand the missing
my heart feel's the pain
Need to hear once more
your sweet voice again

It's been so long
since I've seen your face
Want to get back to feel
your warm embrace

Only you have the power
to sooth the pain in my heart
Let's get back to the feeling
and promise never to part


( not to great but try to do what you can to contribute or start your own )

Send Her My Love?