Writing.........share some?

General Intelligent Discussion & One Thread About That Buttknuckle

Moderator: Andrew

How do you feel about my thread?

I think your crazy, go away you loon of a woman!
2
13%
I like writing, I also like nice walks on the beach.
3
20%
I can barely read much less write.
1
7%
Thinking makes my head hurt, I need a beer.
2
13%
I think Gingy is quite peachy!
7
47%
 
Total votes : 15

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:20 am

Lula wrote:
Michigan Girl wrote:
Great job, Deano ...I really think you should pursue this as a career,
you're fabulous!!
Someone will help you with the grammar and punctuation!! :wink: :lol:


not for any audience, but for the overgrown frat boy crowd he has a fan base ;).

i do think dean has a knack for story telling and should spend some time honing his craft.


Apparently Deano loves appealing to the frat boy in most guys. I have to laugh at his brutish humor, and descriptive nature. I do think he is humorous, and should definitely think about writing. Maybe pulp fiction as they say?
Last edited by artist4perry on Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:05 am, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby Rockindeano » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:26 am

artist4perry wrote:
Lula wrote:
Michigan Girl wrote:
Great job, Deano ...I really think you should pursue this as a career,
you're fabulous!!
Someone will help you with the grammar and punctuation!! :wink: :lol:


not for any audience, but for the overgrown frat boy crowd he has a fan base ;).

i do think dean has a knack for story telling and should spend some time honing his craft.


Apparently Deano loves appealing to the frat boy in most guys. I have to laugh at his brutish humor, and discriptive nature. I do think he is humorous, and should definately think about writing. Maybe pulp fiction as they say?


Sweetie,

it's descriptive and definitely. :P
User avatar
Rockindeano
Forever Deano
 
Posts: 25864
Joined: Thu Jul 22, 2004 2:52 am
Location: At Peace

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:00 am

Rockindeano wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Lula wrote:
Michigan Girl wrote:
Great job, Deano ...I really think you should pursue this as a career,
you're fabulous!!
Someone will help you with the grammar and punctuation!! :wink: :lol:


not for any audience, but for the overgrown frat boy crowd he has a fan base ;).

i do think dean has a knack for story telling and should spend some time honing his craft.


Apparently Deano loves appealing to the frat boy in most guys. I have to laugh at his brutish humor, and discriptive nature. I do think he is humorous, and should definately think about writing. Maybe pulp fiction as they say?


Sweetie,

it's descriptive and definitely. :P


Polishing that trophy till it's blinding.........the other thing you do to tire out your wrists.................. :wink: :lol: :lol: :twisted:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby YoungJRNY » Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:05 am

artist4perry wrote:Nice story Deano, very you, and yes, funny!

Youngjrny..........storylines take time for comics, but in short that was a good twist.


Yeah I came up with it with short brainstorms and simple plot lines but it worked.

I also wrote a blog about my football experience since the day I was 8 and the struggle of completion in my ability and doubt, all the way up until my senior year of being captain of my football team. A lot of high and low roads both haunted and breathed intensity and energetic soul searching throughout my entire timeline. I first put all of my blogs up on myspace and it hit over 900 views. I also put it up on facebook after the fact and had tons of personal responses from a lot of people I didn't even really know giving me kudos for writing and hitting that point of buildup to give the reader a reason to view that next chapter. I think Maui Tom and Rick on the boards caught hold of it and read it as well.
Image
User avatar
YoungJRNY
Compact Disc
 
Posts: 7000
Joined: Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:54 am
Location: Krypton

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:15 am

YoungJRNY wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Nice story Deano, very you, and yes, funny!

Youngjrny..........storylines take time for comics, but in short that was a good twist.


Yeah I came up with it with short brainstorms and simple plot lines but it worked.

I also wrote a blog about my football experience since the day I was 8 and the struggle of completion in my ability and doubt, all the way up until my senior year of being captain of my football team. A lot of high and low roads both haunted and breathed intensity and energetic soul searching throughout my entire timeline. I first put all of my blogs up on myspace and it hit over 900 views. I also put it up on facebook after the fact and had tons of personal responses from a lot of people I didn't even really know giving me kudos for writing and hitting that point of buildup to give the reader a reason to view that next chapter. I think Maui Tom and Rick on the boards caught hold of it and read it as well.


Keep up your artistic traits, I am sure Deano will add more later.........I am sure he has tons of stories. :wink: :lol: :lol:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby Rockindeano » Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:21 am

artist4perry wrote:
YoungJRNY wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Nice story Deano, very you, and yes, funny!

Youngjrny..........storylines take time for comics, but in short that was a good twist.


Yeah I came up with it with short brainstorms and simple plot lines but it worked.

I also wrote a blog about my football experience since the day I was 8 and the struggle of completion in my ability and doubt, all the way up until my senior year of being captain of my football team. A lot of high and low roads both haunted and breathed intensity and energetic soul searching throughout my entire timeline. I first put all of my blogs up on myspace and it hit over 900 views. I also put it up on facebook after the fact and had tons of personal responses from a lot of people I didn't even really know giving me kudos for writing and hitting that point of buildup to give the reader a reason to view that next chapter. I think Maui Tom and Rick on the boards caught hold of it and read it as well.


Keep up your artistic traits, I am sure Deano will add more later.........I am sure he has tons of stories. :wink: :lol: :lol:


I was told my "Rachel" story was more erotica than humour. I take it you didn't read it. Ginger.
User avatar
Rockindeano
Forever Deano
 
Posts: 25864
Joined: Thu Jul 22, 2004 2:52 am
Location: At Peace

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:27 am

Rockindeano wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
YoungJRNY wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Nice story Deano, very you, and yes, funny!

Youngjrny..........storylines take time for comics, but in short that was a good twist.


Yeah I came up with it with short brainstorms and simple plot lines but it worked.

I also wrote a blog about my football experience since the day I was 8 and the struggle of completion in my ability and doubt, all the way up until my senior year of being captain of my football team. A lot of high and low roads both haunted and breathed intensity and energetic soul searching throughout my entire timeline. I first put all of my blogs up on myspace and it hit over 900 views. I also put it up on facebook after the fact and had tons of personal responses from a lot of people I didn't even really know giving me kudos for writing and hitting that point of buildup to give the reader a reason to view that next chapter. I think Maui Tom and Rick on the boards caught hold of it and read it as well.


Keep up your artistic traits, I am sure Deano will add more later.........I am sure he has tons of stories. :wink: :lol: :lol:


I was told my "Rachel" story was more erotica than humour. I take it you didn't read it. Ginger.


I read it and laughed.........sorry Deano. :lol: :lol: :lol:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby YoungJRNY » Sat Jul 24, 2010 9:46 am

That's it Deano? No more? What the fuck? I'm getting blue balls myself by just thinkin' this is over. Post some more of those stories you got, holy shit was that highly entertaining. That part to where the cream blistered your asshole made me laugh like a mother fucker.
Image
User avatar
YoungJRNY
Compact Disc
 
Posts: 7000
Joined: Thu Feb 21, 2008 5:54 am
Location: Krypton

Postby Everett » Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:39 am

I would like to read the chapter on the discovery of mr 8)
All in a day's work
Everett
Compact Disc
 
Posts: 5791
Joined: Thu Oct 19, 2006 8:17 pm
Location: Milwaukee, WI

Postby rockinfayrose » Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:06 am

This is an interesting thread for sure. Since I'm a writer, this certainly appeals to me. I've dabbled in writing all over the spectrum - screenplays, cookbook, reviews, magazine articles, press releases, poetry. Unfortunately, I've been pretty inactive in that area lately but this certainly makes me want to pick up the pen again :)

Props to Dean for the engrossing book excerpts - you can use a whole bunch of emoticons after that read :) :shock: 8) :lol: :oops: :o :roll: :wink: :P :lol: I love reading the short story genre to begin with, even more so when mixed with erotica, real life and humor. After all of Dean's entertaining posts already on MR, his writing talent comes as no surprise :wink:
Live. Laugh. Love...And Never Stop Rockin'!!!

...and go visit www.soulinspireddesigns.com
User avatar
rockinfayrose
8 Track
 
Posts: 729
Joined: Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:58 pm
Location: Santa Monica, CA

Postby Rockindeano » Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:26 am

YoungJRNY wrote:That's it Deano? No more? What the fuck? I'm getting blue balls myself by just thinkin' this is over. Post some more of those stories you got, holy shit was that highly entertaining. That part to where the cream blistered your asshole made me laugh like a mother fucker.


YJ-

I have to leave some for the book do I not?

I will post one more tonight. It's called "Jizz Ants."
User avatar
Rockindeano
Forever Deano
 
Posts: 25864
Joined: Thu Jul 22, 2004 2:52 am
Location: At Peace

Postby Arianddu » Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:42 pm

Every time I've tried to describe the attraction of these forums, the best way I've had to describe it is that it's like being in a 24-7 global open-house party. There's a mixed crowd - some people are close friends, some are acquaintances you know to chat to, some you've never seen before in your life. People drift from conversation to conversation; some knots of discussion are purely light-hearted, some get seriously intense. But in the end, it's just a party, and everyone is here to have fun.

So, just to annoy the poetry-haters amongst you, here are my rough thoughts. Anyone wanting to criticize some patches of dodgy scansion can either accept that this was a fast first draft, or pretend they're song lyrics and the singer will smooth out the bumps. :lol: :lol:



This forum makes me think always
Of the parties of my days
When my house had an open door.

These people wandering through my life,
Some bring joy and some bring strife
And yet I welcome it, and more.

There is a party going on,
The address – melodicrock dot com
Maybe you'll see what I see.

Though it's in type, this scattered rabble
Fill the air with the same babble,
In this global house party.

The ones in the corner, the fortyish males,
A gathered crowd laughing at their tales;
These kings who hold their court.

On the couch sit serious faces,
Discussing far off troubled places
The lessons learned and taught.

The spark of fire, opinions stated,
Political views supported and hated;
But with a smile, the laughter mends.

The flashing smiles, the roguish laugh,
The flirting jokes half meant and half
Not, between two just-friends.

The young men, eager to impress
The older crowd with their prowess,
Make confident mistakes

And with those flaws are teased until
Humility joins all their skill,
The lesson hard, but still it takes.

Jokes are cracked and tales shared,
Past experience compared,
Advice is sought and given.

The preening social queens and witches,
The bastard men and total bitches,
By whom to anger we are driven,

Surprise us then with their compassion
With their loyalty and passion
When we're in another thread.

And there's the duffer we adore
Despite his social gaffs and more.
And there's one whose tongue we dread.

There's the prankster, always joking,
And the one who's most provoking,
With whom I simply can't agree.

And there's the one who I adore,
A loyal friend, true, and more,
Who it is always joy to see.

And those of us who're growing older -
The marks of age are getting bolder –
But in our minds we're twenty five.

'Remember when...' is our catch-cry
We think back to the days gone by,
The songs that keep our youth alive.


'Arianddu'.
Last edited by Arianddu on Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:03 am, edited 1 time in total.
Why treat life as a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving in an attractive & well-preserved body? Get there by skidding in sideways, a glass of wine in one hand, chocolate in the other, body totally worn out, screaming WOOHOO! What a ride!
User avatar
Arianddu
Stereo LP
 
Posts: 4509
Joined: Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:43 pm
Location: Adelaide, Australia

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:01 pm

Ari, I love it! More, More!! :D
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby Angel » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:05 pm

The only thing I've written about in the last two years is disease, pregnancy, complications of pregnancy, birth and midwifery....hardly the captivating stories anyone would care to read.
User avatar
Angel
Stereo LP
 
Posts: 3995
Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:41 am

Postby artist4perry » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:08 pm

Angel wrote:The only thing I've written about in the last two years is disease, pregnancy, complications of pregnancy, birth and midwifery....hardly the captivating stories anyone would care to read.


I don't know, Deano putting Nair on his anal area was graphic enough. :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: And funny as all get out............... :lol: :lol:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby Angel » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:11 pm

artist4perry wrote:
Angel wrote:The only thing I've written about in the last two years is disease, pregnancy, complications of pregnancy, birth and midwifery....hardly the captivating stories anyone would care to read.


I don't know, Deano putting Nair on his anal area was graphic enough. :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: And funny as all get out............... :lol: :lol:


I don't think he read the instructions-they specifically state to do a test patch 24 hours before using on the desired area-according to his story-he skipped that step. I am also fairly certain that there are warnings about avoiding certain "sensitive" areas as well.....so see, it's all his fault-I have no sympathy. :lol: :lol: :wink:
User avatar
Angel
Stereo LP
 
Posts: 3995
Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:41 am

Postby Rip Rokken » Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:22 pm

conversationpc wrote:
Rockindeano wrote:I write Ginger. In fact I am supposed to be finishing up a book of short but true stories of my bizarre life, but am a bit behind schedule. Laura* is pissed at me, as she is my 'agent' in this endeavor.

Here's one that will be in the book. I shared it before but about 3 years ago, so some here may have read it and some not. It is a true episode, and none of it is enhanced.

Liquid Soap Shuffle and Top Ramen Guy

Once, I was pissed at work...


Good work...Extra points for using the British spelling for "colours". :lol:


LOL!!! I was just about to comment on the same thing!

Image
Image
User avatar
Rip Rokken
Digital Audio Tape
 
Posts: 9203
Joined: Mon Oct 01, 2007 5:43 pm
Location: Vadokken City

Postby Rip Rokken » Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:24 pm

Angel wrote:The only thing I've written about in the last two years is disease, pregnancy, complications of pregnancy, birth and midwifery....hardly the captivating stories anyone would care to read.


What's that? When you've been married 3 times, is that the one in the middle? I guess any odd number of marriages could have a midwife.

Image
Image
User avatar
Rip Rokken
Digital Audio Tape
 
Posts: 9203
Joined: Mon Oct 01, 2007 5:43 pm
Location: Vadokken City

Postby RedWingFan » Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:36 pm

YoungJRNY wrote:That's it Deano? No more? What the fuck? I'm getting blue balls myself by just thinkin' this is over. Post some more of those stories you got, holy shit was that highly entertaining. That part to where the cream blistered your asshole made me laugh like a mother fucker.

"Congressional debates" made me laugh!!!
Seven Wishes wrote:"Abysmal? He's the most proactive President since Clinton, and he's bringing much-needed change for the better to a nation that has been tyrannized by the worst President since Hoover."- 7 Wishes on Pres. Obama
User avatar
RedWingFan
Digital Audio Tape
 
Posts: 7868
Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 5:37 pm
Location: The Peoples Republic of Michigan

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby Andrew » Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:59 pm

artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:
User avatar
Andrew
Administrator
 
Posts: 10961
Joined: Thu Aug 29, 2002 9:12 pm
Location: Hobart, Tasmania, Australia

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby artist4perry » Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:31 pm

Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby Andrew » Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:41 pm

artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:


LOL

No one in this forum is a subject, but....
User avatar
Andrew
Administrator
 
Posts: 10961
Joined: Thu Aug 29, 2002 9:12 pm
Location: Hobart, Tasmania, Australia

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby artist4perry » Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:43 pm

Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:


LOL

No one in this forum is a subject, but....


Is my thread off base? :shock:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby Maui Tom » Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:53 pm

artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:


LOL

No one in this forum is a subject, but....


Is my thread off base? :shock:


nope! :)
Your life is now your life is now your life is now
User avatar
Maui Tom
Cassette Tape
 
Posts: 2450
Joined: Tue May 30, 2006 4:17 am

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby Andrew » Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:06 pm

artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:


LOL

No one in this forum is a subject, but....


Is my thread off base? :shock:


Not at all :P
User avatar
Andrew
Administrator
 
Posts: 10961
Joined: Thu Aug 29, 2002 9:12 pm
Location: Hobart, Tasmania, Australia

Re: Writing.........share some?

Postby artist4perry » Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:41 pm

Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:
Andrew wrote:
artist4perry wrote:Do any of you guys dabble in writing?


Ooooh, yes indeedy do.... And I'm gathering more material on a daily basis. :twisted:


:shock: :shock: :shock: Hopefully I am so boring and unimportant I did not make a character in your writing............. :shock:


LOL

No one in this forum is a subject, but....


Is my thread off base? :shock:


Not at all :P


Don't scare me Andrew!............. :shock: :shock: :shock: :lol:
User avatar
artist4perry
MP3
 
Posts: 10462
Joined: Sun Jun 29, 2008 12:42 am
Location: Running around in the vast universe that is my imagination. Send help!

Postby The Sushi Hunter » Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:53 am

I've been working on a few pieces:

1) Breaking it off in your ass.

2) Happiness (Is shrapnel after detonation)

3) I'm going to love you with my knife.

4) Liberal hunting permit (my newest one)
User avatar
The Sushi Hunter
Stereo LP
 
Posts: 4881
Joined: Sun Dec 02, 2007 11:54 am
Location: Hidden Valley, Japan

Postby conversationpc » Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:57 am

Just posted a new article on my blog regarding my interaction with those lovelies at the Westboro Baptist Church...

Westboro Wall of Fame
My blog = Dave's Dominion
User avatar
conversationpc
Super Audio CD
 
Posts: 17830
Joined: Wed Jun 21, 2006 5:53 am
Location: Slightly south of sanity...

Previous

Return to Snowmobiles For The Sahara

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 12 guests